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Free verse № 4361

Midnight

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

The hour is getting late I wonder why I wait Too much time to think Maybe I need a drink It might clear my head Or just empy it instead Midnight in a nowhere place Hide or debate the rat race Something I can almost taste Still I worry about waste Striving for mirrored dreams When nothing is as it seems Maybe the tonic and gin Will put me together again Or perhaps I should go for a drive But how will I know if I arrive?

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[9] Redfin 13-Jul-02/10:41 PM Reply
Sounds like me Last Friday night:)
[n/a] Artemis745 11-Oct-03/3:07 PM Reply
Interesting.