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Midnight (Free verse) by jfackf

The hour is getting late I wonder why I wait Too much time to think Maybe I need a drink It might clear my head Or just empy it instead Midnight in a nowhere place Hide or debate the rat race Something I can almost taste Still I worry about waste Striving for mirrored dreams When nothing is as it seems Maybe the tonic and gin Will put me together again Or perhaps I should go for a drive But how will I know if I arrive?

Artemis745 11-Oct-03/3:07 PM
Interesting.




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