Re: a comment on plagiarism txt by daniella	30-Jul-03/8:19 PM
The "hmmm" must be the sound of your mind trying to figure out where you might fit in, somehow.
Re: a comment on HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8	30-Jul-03/8:09 PM
Are you blind? It's Euro trash wit with a touch of chilled crab.
Re: Seeing Clearly in the Dark by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/7:40 PM
1. what does dew smell like? Precisely 2. Do you ever get the feeling that you're losing your grasp on the difference between too, and to, and two? 3."When I wake up in your bed I know I have been dreaming". probably the most uninteresting observation I've ever had the disservice of witnessing. Congratulation. Somehow I get the feeling you're just a tiger in the sack, grrrrr. lol. [some number I've forgotten between 1 and 10 oh, 4.]"As the light collided with walls Hurting and cutting me deep" Jesus homer are you onto some bulbs we're all missing? just maybe. 5. "But tonight the sky is dark" Another brilliant observation. You would be a great babysitter you could be like "well, the child was young and small"? well yeah? 6."And I had kissed you with my eyes Holding you tightly with my breath" David Copperfield, I will have you know, is cackeling at you, along with me, Jesus, The Devil, Carl Jung, and Castro(?). In other words, Thom, you could make Hallmark cry, but please spare me the trouble of making you cry, by belittling your most inappropriate attempts at poetry I've seen in weeks. Enjoy this and put it over your mantel. 'THEE MOST HONORABLE AWARD OF MERIT IN THE ART OF BEING INCONCEIVABLY REDUNDANT WITH EXTRAORDINARY GLEE IS BEQUEETHED UPON THEE AND YOU'S AND YOURS' Be blessed sir, there's a poet in you somewhere. Perhaps you should go watch hamburger hill and get those juices flowing, because sir, your poem was shat.
Re: a comment on And so the spider spun by horus8	30-Jul-03/7:23 PM
I don't do ducks.
Re: a comment on Vichyssoise, then murder by horus8	30-Jul-03/7:19 PM
Perhaps, it's about your inability to comprehend what you fear. E-mail yourself cripple, spare me the trouble because, this poem is about pure fucking murder, and I have no time for silly games.
Re: I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/4:24 PM
And those stupid fucking ~ ~ curly things sure doesn't fucking help your case, nor does your inventive way of spelling tom or when you wrote it (date time etc) unless you're dead or moonlighting from politics.
Re: I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/4:17 PM
Well there goes my last nerve. This poem is so incredibly contrived and forced it's practically comical. Some how you've succeeded in sucking the juice of my interest in one of our planets most mysteriously fascinating creatures (spiders) from my life permanently. Everyline in your poem is defining the absolute of something absolutely undefinable. Nobody needs you to tell them the fucking obvious. Every person alive has this story in one way shape or form, but my friend there is only 1 Charlotte's web and this is not it.all that you've mentioned azbove is a given we all have made that same symbolical connection. Why not dig deeper and make us earn the poetry. WHY! damnit, it pisses me off when poets turn fucking turn mutual of Omoha in monotone and black and white. And please don't be sensitive about my critic here friend. There is know need to be the best poetry is Poker not blind stud. Because, that's what you're doing here purposely showing us your cards, and my friend that only works if you are rich, and you're not, and I mean rich in the sense of 'a damn brilliant writer' Someone, that can explain the simplist and most mundane situations in the most beautiful way definable. Hemmingway, Joyce, Wolfe. The bottom line is you don't have the language to play stud poker with a spider poem buddy. That shit is sacred, and should be treated so, and I know you feel like you've done your bit and your justified on the subject, but you left out the essential magic connection between us and arachnids, and focused on the known taken for granteds. So I can only give you a 6.
Re: a comment on Vichyssoise, then murder by horus8	30-Jul-03/3:57 PM
What's to get? It's fucking murder.
Re: a comment on Vichyssoise, then murder by horus8	30-Jul-03/3:46 PM
Ha! Ha! Not as interesting as you coincidentally popping up. A proud and predictable man hardly worth your need to be interested, at best, and perpetually. If your poetic skill was a bio rhythm, you'd be flatlining in ICU accordingly. Wearing an uninteresting assortment of tubes, surrounded by the people you've despised the most in life, bickering amungst themselves over "who loved you the most", and "who'll chuck your ashed callateral off of the biggest bridge out of Shitsville". So by all means, speak your mind. If anyone's earned the right to be uninterestingly uninterested Sirah, you have. Oh, off handedly, when you do get interested an anything other than the dung you wallow in out of necessity... Send me a postcard pal. Ha ha ha ha.
Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	30-Jul-03/1:49 PM
Actually, what interests me, is how many hits this poem has received due to its title. Things like that just fascinate the hell into me.
Re: To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>	30-Jul-03/1:42 PM
It's a shame you're the only competition this sight has to offer, and a dark secret relief.
Re: HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8	30-Jul-03/12:36 PM
You should quote me where applicable, (as in the whole poem since I wrote it) because otherwise, you're such a talentless cad, you can't even plagiarise my comments with out saturating it all in your own homosexual jealous straight edge BORING tantrumesque piddle. Good work 10!
Re: a comment on DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos	30-Jul-03/1:10 AM
No, they're not really. But I believe the reader gets my poke at conformity.
Re: a comment on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer	28-Jul-03/6:07 PM
I liked the poem, but don't get melodramatic.
Re: unlucky burglar, unlucky me by cacophony	28-Jul-03/2:17 PM
Ha!
Re: a comment on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer	28-Jul-03/1:26 PM
No, why.
Re: summer feeling by nolan	28-Jul-03/1:17 PM
lol. "but that isn't different that is called being alone" vintage.
Re: a comment on Us by sk8rs_rule_all	28-Jul-03/12:45 PM
It has the correct syllabol count.
Re: a comment on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	28-Jul-03/12:34 PM
Gay men never grab their knees, they grab yours and a drink.
Re: Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	28-Jul-03/12:33 PM
Tasty.