Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	1-Aug-03/2:13 AM
202.78.97.13 Why do you toy with me darky? I thought we were in love.
Re: My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams	1-Aug-03/2:09 AM
Childish and honest, brave. 8
Re: Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams	1-Aug-03/2:07 AM
Yep.
Re: a comment on Vichyssoise, then murder by horus8	1-Aug-03/2:03 AM
Yes, I didn't.
Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy	1-Aug-03/1:54 AM
How someone could give a groaning dismount a zero is so fucking beyond me, here.
Re: a comment on We'll be Louvers and shade by <{Baba^Yaga}>	1-Aug-03/1:50 AM
Exactly, I fused rubbers with Rhubarb to feed of the pie trick. Can you forgive me?
Re: A Lack of Care by William J. Mitchell	1-Aug-03/1:35 AM
I'm going to ask you whether or not my critique is worth your time. Too fucking bad. Here it is... Your poem is interesting and closes well, but your structure is really unreadable and off kilter, grammarilly and metricly speaking. Here's a 7. Enjoy your stay.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	1-Aug-03/1:29 AM
Well, well... Looky where I am? Yes sir, on another one of your wordy fat assed cowems. If I hadn't of farted half way through reading this dedication to self loathing I probably would've cracked my head open nodding off into my my fucking moniter. Justly so, that deserves a seven in my book.
Re: I Hate Andy Jeon by JoyLuck	1-Aug-03/1:21 AM
A classic. Very intelligent, and uncompromisable. Really, friend, a beautiful, beautiful, tiny piece of magic.
Re: a comment on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	1-Aug-03/1:15 AM
Coincidentally, that's what I gave you as you walked by.
Re: a comment on When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy	31-Jul-03/3:53 PM
You're a cutie pie.
Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy	31-Jul-03/12:01 PM
Hilarious
Re: Ah ha ah ha by -=Tan_Hand=-	31-Jul-03/11:47 AM
Then she took off her wig and said FBI freeze pedo guido!
Re: A Sullen Moon by Jimbo	31-Jul-03/11:43 AM
"On the night of the moon We kissed again with tears" As opposed to the night of the 'no moon' listing with beers? "Sorry at times you’ve crossed the threshold of grief" The last time I crossed the threshold of grief, I had to put my bride down for a minute to get my wheels over the molding. "Wanting to become you for brief moments To feel all that you feel and want all that you need You are the rose upon my bloom yes my Rose And gently I’d remove your petals like cloths" Wait a minute... Let me get out my Capt. Crunch decoder... yes, just as I suspected. You have a sever fear of rejection coupled by the weight of the idea that you are a burden to those around you that you love. Yet you are so full of pride and blinded by the American stereo type of what a father figure and a husband's supposed to be yo can barely sleep at night or look at yourself in the mirror. that's a horrible way for you to live man, and all in your mind. What a shame. have you tried viagra and just letting the past go? Well then again, you're not very bright I gather because of your inebility to locate my e-mail, or address to beat me up when it's in plain site, not to mention the fact that a child could, left handed, see where I live and who I am In seconds upon the web these days since that information isn't secret, or you could get my # from Z. Shit man there's all kinds of ways for you to beat me up, or are you as incompitent at problem solving as you are at poetry? Pardon me, my mother just called out to me for lunch, I'm five, I have to go now, today's peanut butter and jelly surprise. The surprise is MURDER. Yippe, and bye Tom.
Re: A Sullen Moon by Jimbo	31-Jul-03/11:25 AM
This is the poetry of a Jethro Tull fan with a shit happens T-shirt tied around their bald pot bellied head. You can find my e- mail on my homepage Einstein, and you can find out all you need to know about me with a good google. Let me know when your coming, I'll put out my wheel chair ramp and turn on the porch light.
Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT	30-Jul-03/9:01 PM
Ha! Cheers.
Re: a comment on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos	30-Jul-03/8:43 PM
There's a backstory to it so you'd have to read the comments. And I'm aware of what a haiku is my friend and have written hundreds, thanks.
Re: I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/8:41 PM
Also, why post a poem if you cannot respond sensibly to a critique. I raised some striking issues to you about where your poetry is going bad, and you respond like a child. I offer structural suggestions and basically, give you your solution on a silver platter, and a formula to work with to improve your poetry since we share mutual friends, and you insult me and disrespect me, over your half assed heinous mutilation of arachnids? You're a fool. There are people that would pay good money to have me give them a creative boost and share some of my techniques. You should listen to better poets when they share advice, it's the only way to learn, not act like a oversensitive spoiled degenerate, for future reference. The poets life is no place for the sensitive & or the spoiled charity case, my friend, remember that if fucking anything I've said. You can burn that one to your pink little brain old man.
Re: a comment on I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/8:29 PM
What problems? Explain to me how me taking lithium, is somehow going to make your shat attempt at poetry better?
Re: a comment on I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/8:27 PM
I know how to spell 'critique' my good man, and how to spell check, but as you can tell I did not deem it neccessary in my comment to you. Since, yo don't deem it justified to put poetry into your poems. Can you spell 'the special olympics fot the poetically challenged'? Here, allow me, it's 'BITTER OLD MAN WITH A SHIT BAG RACING FOR THE TRUTH'. Sorry about that, phew... Is my bow tie okay?