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I Hate Andy Jeon (Free verse) by JoyLuck
$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$ $$ $$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$ $$ $$$$ $$ $$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$ $$$ $$$$$$$$ $$ $$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ w $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ h p$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ o r $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ r i $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ e e $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ s $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ t $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$ groundzerogroundzerogroundzero "It was beautiful! When I saw those bodies tumble downwards towards the twisted metal trash heap of infidels I laughed out loud and praised Allah for the death of these heretics!" "I had woken up earlier than usual that morning. September 11th was my mother's birthday. I turned my television on as the 2nd plane hit." I hate Andy Jeon He thinks he is so smart That he will surf down the Rumble while Performing logarithms in his head.

Up the ladder: Wake me up before you go
Down the ladder: Emily

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7595
Posted: July 31, 2003 10:27 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2003 10:15 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Aug-03/1:21 AM | Reply
A classic. Very intelligent, and uncompromisable. Really, friend, a beautiful, beautiful, tiny piece of magic.
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.20.171 > horus8 | 1-Aug-03/2:19 AM | Reply
lol u serious
i wasn't that sure about this one
it didn't exactly come out as i wanted to
and stuff didn't fit on the little submit box
so this is a very much scaled down version
but i think i'm going to take it off and re do it
[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > JoyLuck | 1-Aug-03/8:17 AM | Reply
leave it be. it really works.
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.130 | 1-Aug-03/7:38 AM | Reply
Lots of people cheered.
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > http://mulberryfairy | 25-Aug-03/11:54 AM | Reply
But not your face, i jeered to the left and hit my trash cans.
[2] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 13-May-04/1:06 PM | Reply
bad ascii art is forbidden.
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 65.173.32.8 > Sasha | 13-May-04/11:17 PM | Reply
you can go die
[n/a] titan69 @ 62.31.23.56 > JoyLuck | 8-Jun-04/1:34 PM | Reply
10/10 for art work .i like your iterpritation of 9;11
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