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I Hate Andy Jeon (Free verse) by JoyLuck
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groundzerogroundzerogroundzero
"It was beautiful!
When I saw those bodies tumble downwards towards the twisted metal trash
heap of infidels I laughed out loud and praised Allah for the death of
these heretics!"
"I had woken up earlier than usual that morning. September 11th was my
mother's birthday. I turned my television on as the 2nd plane hit."
I hate Andy Jeon
He thinks he is so smart
That he will surf down the
Rumble while
Performing logarithms in his head.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7595
Posted: July 31, 2003 10:27 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2003 10:15 PM PDT
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i wasn't that sure about this one
it didn't exactly come out as i wanted to
and stuff didn't fit on the little submit box
so this is a very much scaled down version
but i think i'm going to take it off and re do it