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Emily (Free verse) by Jetes
You make me feel many things,
Happy and confused to name a few,
There arent enough words,
For me to describe you.
Youre just as gorgeous,
As flowers just in bloom,
I cant help but notice,
How your smile brightens the room.
Cant figure you out,
Painful like a deep cut,
No matter how hard I try,
You cant seem to open up.
I never mean to cause you stress,
I want my time to be worthwhile,
I just hope you know,
I only wish to make you smile.
I am not perfect,
I try not to do you wrong,
Each minute without you,
Is a minute too long.
The first thing in my head when I wake,
The last thing before I sleep,
Forever and always,
Your friendship I want to keep.
It doesnt matter when or where,
You are always on my mind,
No matter how hard I try,
Its your heart I cant seem to find.
"By heaven, I love thee better than myself."
-Romeo & Juliet
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7596
Posted: August 2, 2003 12:20 AM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2003 12:20 AM PDT
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