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Emily (Free verse) by Jetes

You make me feel many things, Happy and confused to name a few, There arent enough words, For me to describe you. Youre just as gorgeous, As flowers just in bloom, I cant help but notice, How your smile brightens the room. Cant figure you out, Painful like a deep cut, No matter how hard I try, You cant seem to open up. I never mean to cause you stress, I want my time to be worthwhile, I just hope you know, I only wish to make you smile. I am not perfect, I try not to do you wrong, Each minute without you, Is a minute too long. The first thing in my head when I wake, The last thing before I sleep, Forever and always, Your friendship I want to keep. It doesnt matter when or where, You are always on my mind, No matter how hard I try, Its your heart I cant seem to find. "By heaven, I love thee better than myself." -Romeo & Juliet

Lifeboatman 2-Aug-03/12:29 AM
Could've been better... write not with your brain




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