| Re: April Showers by mindsigns |
18-Feb-03/7:33 PM |
nice try, but you fail.
miserably may i add.
watch
Look at me a fucking hack
a steaming mound of poo
i can't see or turn back
because i'm sniffing glue
and i know i'm absurd
for dicking with the pope
it's just the way i praise the word
when i can barely cope
with the shit i read all day
how can one survive
i need a whip to properly flay
i hate being alive
Can you fucking blame me?
You were serving cold tea.
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| Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
19-Feb-03/11:30 AM |
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Best thing you've written in 6 months, and people wonder why i tear the shit out of pseudo poetry? obviously because it's the opposite of this... GQT AWARDE! 10
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| Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/11:34 AM |
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It's missing your boss and a pawn shop.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Feb-03/11:54 AM |
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was i expecting the magna carta? no.
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| Re: Moo Gai Pai lover (dedicated to Settle) by Sylvia Bravo |
20-Feb-03/11:50 AM |
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What i thought was impressive was how you rhymed pengs,pong, I, and begs while maintaining absolutely no cohesiveness. You should get a life and give up on writing, before the stupid in you catches up with the psychotic desperation. THE SOONER YOU ADMIT TO THE FACT THAT you are an uneducated lesbian in need of thorazine, the sooner your dreams of being a papaya farmer with a mustache and cock will come true. Until then though, this is not a vilanelle, or sadly even remotely funny. Settle is gay and into rock hard hot biceps and shafts a pumping. not desperate idiots on the verge of garbage disposing their own faces out of sheer pathetic loneliness, and the fact that no one gives a shit.
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| Re: vent tent by Crakyamuni |
20-Feb-03/11:57 AM |
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I have never heard a buddhist come out of left field like you just did to express his feelings in such a un-monkishishish way. You are my hero. you wouldn't know budha from Malthusian. maybe that's your gimmeck? give em hell kid! here i packed you a lunch and even wrote your name on it, so i wouldn't forget who you are and you would never remember and nobody brought a fgucking snack anyway, Chip.
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| Re: Call Me by newdawnfades |
20-Feb-03/5:27 PM |
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lactating while you weep is very becoming. i gave you the blue one.
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| Re: Pinjur by Shardik |
21-Feb-03/6:55 PM |
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schizophrenics see secret messages everywhere. it's a james talor song, and it was before you were born, and i think it was a folk song before even he played it, just because you went to school there, don't fucking ruin the place for everyone else.lol. There are no messages. i am not mr. pig, but you are clinicaly and most obviously a seriously unstable cuek. Jesus. i have never seen a person light themselves on fire before, impressive, I mean, if you could write, of course.
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| Re: No One by sk8boardandpoems |
25-Feb-03/8:49 PM |
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When i was a young man growing up in southern ca. i skated with gator, and lance mountain a lot, but they did not write poetry this profound, but if they did think about all of the great tricks that would of never been invented. Perhaps you juggle? This poem has a long way to go, but you have to start somewhere i guess. What's your problem with razora? You are aware that in the writing spectrum she out classes you horribly, right? I don't think this deserves a zero, so here's a five.
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| Re: Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig |
25-Feb-03/9:01 PM |
19. syl. i would like to take this opportunity to say seamen eight and a half times
seamen seamen
seamen seamen seamen
seamen seamen seamen
sea
great subject by the way.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Feb-03/9:15 PM |
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I think Apollo is the wrong symbol here, how about dreamer, or hunter, archer...recruit?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Feb-03/9:17 PM |
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because Apollo was everything, but a soldier, he was a philosopher, and musician among other things (sun dragger).
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Feb-03/9:22 PM |
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So is it true that at risdi they pump you up to think you are special? Because, you are. I heard that from a Walloon named spivey.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Feb-03/7:52 PM |
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Nice one Bill! Ace poem! We want you to know that the crocodile we hired you to wrestle wont come out of our trousers? Regardless of your high pitched sycophant banter. Microphobic.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Feb-03/8:02 PM |
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Sounds like you've earned your laureateship. Would you care to wear my lucky cock ring to the ceremony? It's plaid and even works for a limp wrister like yourself. Jeremi, as my mother would say before i ate her. You are not my son, bastard... Go find your own food.
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| Re: I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand |
26-Feb-03/8:18 PM |
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Hurry! I wouldn't want to miss that. Will you wear your shower cap too?
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| Re: Moon In My Blood by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:06 PM |
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Well, you have your user name going for you, atleast. Do you know who atalanta was? i hope so. Otherwise you would just suck, bleeding or not.
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| Re: Too Nearly Remembered by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:12 PM |
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That was pleasent, for an 'other'. It must be terribly awkward to try so hard only to be ignored consistantly. nice vilanelle. The rhyme scheme was almost as complex as the story, or a haircut.
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| Re: Too Nearly Remembered by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:16 PM |
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"waver" = waiver, must be tr and not settle tsk. what war? this piece is barely a seven, and i'm in a good mood. What a waste of time...see... settle would not make an error like that, that's where you blew your cover. Both of your edges are boring and dull period anyway just giving you a heads up sycophants.
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| Re: Forget I Asked by AtalantaPendragonne |
27-Feb-03/2:17 PM |
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