on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 7:08 PM
I've never seen a bird with wheels.
on Dance With Me by marvelis
18 Feb 2003, 7:05 PM
Will do.
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 7:02 PM
penises, ra, and fountains...
A triumph, surely.p
A triumph, surely.p
on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus
17 Feb 2003, 2:11 PM
I'm amazed you can even tie your shoes, let alone concentrate all of your magical powers to bury the east coast in a blanket of your racist demeanor. pickle chin.
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
17 Feb 2003, 11:51 AM
Furcke...
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 11:58 AM
Can i play this one to some chord patterns i got laying around? you shoulde hear what i did with da's the croutchlinge.
on Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones
18 Feb 2003, 7:18 PM
Teah, but does your son nod off at three years old on the couch while playing video games sick on robitussin... sitting up playing salt water fishing? some thing just make me giggle.
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 7:13 PM
jesus man, are you rapping about your daughters cheek floss? that's uncool... 11!!
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 7:00 PM
As compared to slap me in the cellar?
your attempt at projecting was... succesfull, now there is no doubting your urge to gag on cock.
Aladdin sane? what is that suppose to convince us that you are eclectic.
here's a ten, just because...what the fuck's the point any more.
your attempt at projecting was... succesfull, now there is no doubting your urge to gag on cock.
Aladdin sane? what is that suppose to convince us that you are eclectic.
here's a ten, just because...what the fuck's the point any more.
on Past by Dostoyevsky
18 Feb 2003, 6:52 PM
Check line 12, and do you mean fractal or fractual. lol. i'll wait.
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
18 Feb 2003, 6:49 PM
it's Quailing named after that thingy that hangs in their face... lol. the last was the best.
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 6:43 PM
here let me simplify it for you.
BAD PEOPLE GET NIGHTMARES. END OF FUCKING STORY
BAD PEOPLE GET NIGHTMARES. END OF FUCKING STORY
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 6:47 PM
have you ever seen the burn mark that lightning leaves upon ones body? it's a trail of bright red, exposed to the surface capilarys shaped and trailing of identical 'artisticaly' to lightning. not ball lightning though. that's spontaneous combustion.
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 6:44 PM
better.
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 6:42 PM
yeah. you were write i was wrong your not that good and you are young. god bless you mrs. calvetti. 7.
on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig
18 Feb 2003, 10:47 AM
Which part of this having 18 syllabols didn't you grasp. The 1 or the 8? Don't get me wrong, because i bend the rules everywhere, but it's unacceptable when dealing with haikus. it's the foundation of the structure and when dealing in this arena it's critical.
on Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 7:21 PM
Walk versus gay sex
a bowl of pears on table
factory worker
a bowl of pears on table
factory worker
on On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 7:26 PM
children mimic their parents, perhaps your a pig?
great haiku though.
great haiku though.
on Synchronicity (Senryu) by bunniesnangels
18 Feb 2003, 7:22 PM
Sink masturbating.