| Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
17-Feb-03/11:51 AM |
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17-Feb-03/11:58 AM |
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Can i play this one to some chord patterns i got laying around? you shoulde hear what i did with da's the croutchlinge.
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| Re: Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus |
17-Feb-03/2:11 PM |
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I'm amazed you can even tie your shoes, let alone concentrate all of your magical powers to bury the east coast in a blanket of your racist demeanor. pickle chin.
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| Re: Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig |
18-Feb-03/10:47 AM |
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Which part of this having 18 syllabols didn't you grasp. The 1 or the 8? Don't get me wrong, because i bend the rules everywhere, but it's unacceptable when dealing with haikus. it's the foundation of the structure and when dealing in this arena it's critical.
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
18-Feb-03/6:41 PM |
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You have exceptional timing, but your poetry? creditcard's 3.00$? to view your web page and poetry? what are you some kind of fucking uppity elitist jew? you should fucking pay people three dollars to read this shit. three dollars a fucking second, idiot.
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18-Feb-03/6:42 PM |
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yeah. you were write i was wrong your not that good and you are young. god bless you mrs. calvetti. 7.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Feb-03/6:43 PM |
here let me simplify it for you.
BAD PEOPLE GET NIGHTMARES. END OF FUCKING STORY
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18-Feb-03/6:44 PM |
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18-Feb-03/6:47 PM |
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have you ever seen the burn mark that lightning leaves upon ones body? it's a trail of bright red, exposed to the surface capilarys shaped and trailing of identical 'artisticaly' to lightning. not ball lightning though. that's spontaneous combustion.
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
18-Feb-03/6:49 PM |
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it's Quailing named after that thingy that hangs in their face... lol. the last was the best.
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| Re: Past by Dostoyevsky |
18-Feb-03/6:52 PM |
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Check line 12, and do you mean fractal or fractual. lol. i'll wait.
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18-Feb-03/7:00 PM |
As compared to slap me in the cellar?
your attempt at projecting was... succesfull, now there is no doubting your urge to gag on cock.
Aladdin sane? what is that suppose to convince us that you are eclectic.
here's a ten, just because...what the fuck's the point any more.
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18-Feb-03/7:02 PM |
penises, ra, and fountains...
A triumph, surely.p
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| Re: Dance With Me by marvelis |
18-Feb-03/7:05 PM |
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18-Feb-03/7:08 PM |
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I've never seen a bird with wheels.
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18-Feb-03/7:13 PM |
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jesus man, are you rapping about your daughters cheek floss? that's uncool... 11!!
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| Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones |
18-Feb-03/7:18 PM |
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Teah, but does your son nod off at three years old on the couch while playing video games sick on robitussin... sitting up playing salt water fishing? some thing just make me giggle.
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| Re: Options (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/7:21 PM |
Walk versus gay sex
a bowl of pears on table
factory worker
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| Re: Synchronicity (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/7:22 PM |
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| Re: On Raising Children (Senryu) by bunniesnangels |
18-Feb-03/7:26 PM |
children mimic their parents, perhaps your a pig?
great haiku though.
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