Re: a comment on Curse fait by Freethinker1602	8-Mar-03/7:42 PM
Anything you say. And why did you call me kitty? I mean why? How on earth did it come about?
Re: I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642	8-Mar-03/7:33 PM
Hehehe. This seems to be a story that repeats itself in adolescence...Get laid. well actually here go off on rage it might help Get bent Eat Shit Fuck off Go rot
Re: Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642	8-Mar-03/7:31 PM
Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this
Re: To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642	8-Mar-03/7:27 PM
I can stand the thought of mine being with another girl... I want him to. We each wasted such a valuable time of our lives. Stop crying. I mean, it won't help. Once you figure out what you want then you can cry. Just keep looking. Stop focusing on one person
Re: Heartbreaker by TrulyUnique0642	8-Mar-03/7:21 PM
yeah man. I know what you mean by it. Yet think. Love just isn't worth it. Well maybe in your case lust....hey what would a paid whore know? Just kidding. But a paid whore would know. I mean they make their living on not loving.
Re: a comment on hehehe by Freethinker1602	7-Mar-03/7:42 PM
see time and time again I see the only way to truly resolve something is to take the negative force out of the equation. Being evil people should just vanish. It's really the simplest alternative. Plus I wrote this and then I thought. Wow. I don't need to be around people. Huh. Yay. I've left them. yet they still have me
Re: Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous	3-Mar-03/7:43 PM
Nice. Then you must know what it is to feel that you search and seek to destroy. That you alone are responsible for certain...things.
Re: a comment on Walk in the Dark by Carvaceous	3-Mar-03/7:42 PM
Thou vile creature bite your tongue till the taste of blood fills your palate. the things you say to others only further proove that you have a most heinous nature towards yourself.
Re: Stolen Away by Carvaceous	3-Mar-03/7:40 PM
Tsk Tsk Tsk. We are too young too love. Too foolish to consider unrequitted feelings. Too young...I'll be your shoulder to cry on in your time of woe.. I only know because I've been through a love so tortorous that I didn't know if I could stand to look in his eyes with out knowing that he'd be ok. That he'd live. Then as I say...Then She Got Over It the title of a new poem. You'll learn and eventually...Hey here's a thought, maybe you were just looking for validation...Try to feel better and get sleep.
Re: Fetish Section by vito0090	3-Mar-03/1:56 PM
hahaha I wish I were 18....
Re: Peacock Fight by vito0090	3-Mar-03/1:55 PM
well that's anending thaty certainly explains many things....
Re: a comment on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/4:18 PM
Perhaps you misunderstood the comment. I try to catch all of my errors before posting, so I run them through word processor. The poems are submitted from a journal that I keep with me at all times. Most of the stuff you read is from the beginning of September. I just try to catch all errors. My futuristic idea of the earth is total annihalation of the human race. Bush will take care of that one for us though...
Re: a comment on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/3:44 PM
Thank you so very much. I changed it. be happy. Unfortunately the word processor doesn't catch every little error
Re: a comment on Fugly by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/3:33 PM
Hehehe sorry, any ways bachus, I don't read your work
Re: a comment on Fugly by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/3:33 PM
I haven't the slitest clue what you said. I changed most of the titles to my poems because my mom found them and read them. She did a little sneaking around, this site is a privelege only to those that find the site through legit means...She however did not. Crystie if you read this...Fuck you. YOU had no right, I don't even live with mom any more, not that I ever will. So just fuck off next time you feel like further tarnishing the relationship with mom.
Re: a comment on No future by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/3:29 PM
HOw kind. SO if it were based on a hundred point system, such as the one they use in the schools, I'd still have failed...
Re: a comment on Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602	26-Feb-03/3:27 PM
I shall not be bothered by your flippant remarks. I submit the poems to my word processor first, then I post them. It said that 'therefor' is no actual word. So I decided to leave it. Hey who am I to question the judgment of a computer?
Re: Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Feb-03/5:21 PM
Is this possibly about the catholic church? Well actually I saw your name else where and was wondering if you know that this is one of the most waesome pieces ever written? I personally think that you have talent. Find yourself a good 'play' though
Re: a comment on And Then She Got Over It by Freethinker1602	24-Feb-03/4:56 PM
Tried. I stop thinking about where I am physically headed. I've ended up in some strange places. Ah well so much for that.
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger	29-Jan-03/6:17 PM
Well this does show moderate talent. We all know that you are capable of far more superior works...It provided something else for me to think about. ThX, Ranger. l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality