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Stolen Away (Free verse) by Carvaceous Vile trust
My wall has been breached
My heart stolen away
Such precious cargo
It breaks without tender care
Ah, yet not enough its proved to be
My wall its armor
A weakness in thoughtless trust
Such misconception
Manipulating trust speaking witty words
Sugar coated hurts
That cracked my wall
And let my heart steal away
For a ledge to sit upon
With trust as its cushion
A cushion of rocks
Shattered now lays my heart
I leave the pieces
And my wall lies echoing
Up the ladder:
Sparks, until Sunvalley.
Down the ladder:
End of year poem
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Posted: March 3, 2003 6:24 PM PST; Last modified: March 3, 2003 6:24 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.922085 Overall Rank: 1411 Comments:
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Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129
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3-Mar-03/7:40 PM
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Tsk Tsk Tsk. We are too young too love. Too foolish to consider unrequitted feelings. Too young...I'll be your shoulder to cry on in your time of woe.. I only know because I've been through a love so tortorous that I didn't know if I could stand to look in his eyes with out knowing that he'd be ok. That he'd live. Then as I say...Then She Got Over It the title of a new poem. You'll learn and eventually...Hey here's a thought, maybe you were just looking for validation...Try to feel better and get sleep.
These shards of red
Laying scattered all around Reflect the beauty A shimmer in the dark A glimmer of hope Some prayer for the future It's all that can be given For one who's heart Now broken in sorrow Lies surounding my feet A note of chance The sound of possibilities To look ahead But never forget This weeping man The hardest of choices Made these shards.....
AWWW,how sad but true,im guessung that you are referring to being heartbroken,good job,nice write
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