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Stolen Away (Free verse) by Carvaceous

Vile trust My wall has been breached My heart stolen away Such precious cargo It breaks without tender care Ah, yet not enough its proved to be My wall its armor A weakness in thoughtless trust Such misconception Manipulating trust speaking witty words Sugar coated hurts That cracked my wall And let my heart steal away For a ledge to sit upon With trust as its cushion A cushion of rocks Shattered now lays my heart I leave the pieces And my wall lies echoing

Topaz Servias 5-Mar-03/7:18 PM
These shards of red
Laying scattered all around
Reflect the beauty
A shimmer in the dark
A glimmer of hope
Some prayer for the future
It's all that can be given
For one who's heart
Now broken in sorrow
Lies surounding my feet
A note of chance
The sound of possibilities
To look ahead
But never forget
This weeping man
The hardest of choices
Made these shards.....




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