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And Then She Got Over It (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
Well some people say They know what it is To have a broken heart Others just forget There are people that See life as incomplete Until they have that Special some one Me I never believed in that 'Till I met him His dancing eyes of blue Would make my heart fly away Every caress would leave me In a world of delusions In every word spoken between us I knew that we couldn't ever Be alone Then things changed Perhaps for the better Yet at the time the vicious Anger I had felt was vulgar I detest myself for having been foolish Some say it is better to have loved And lost then to never Have ever loved at all I beg to differ Love clouds judgment To the point where we over look Unbearable and disgusting imperfection Now I realize that it is better To ignore the pain I had and say Their loss And now I laugh at them For now I realise my love was untrue

Up the ladder: pledging allegiance

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.375
Weighted score: 5.100853
Overall Rank: 6044
Posted: February 23, 2003 7:06 PM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2003 7:07 PM PST
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[5] Nanshe @ 67.84.174.185 | 23-Feb-03/9:17 PM | Reply
Take notes as you walk.
[n/a] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 > Nanshe | 24-Feb-03/4:56 PM | Reply
Tried. I stop thinking about where I am physically headed. I've ended up in some strange places. Ah well so much for that.
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