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And Then She Got Over It (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

Well some people say They know what it is To have a broken heart Others just forget There are people that See life as incomplete Until they have that Special some one Me I never believed in that 'Till I met him His dancing eyes of blue Would make my heart fly away Every caress would leave me In a world of delusions In every word spoken between us I knew that we couldn't ever Be alone Then things changed Perhaps for the better Yet at the time the vicious Anger I had felt was vulgar I detest myself for having been foolish Some say it is better to have loved And lost then to never Have ever loved at all I beg to differ Love clouds judgment To the point where we over look Unbearable and disgusting imperfection Now I realize that it is better To ignore the pain I had and say Their loss And now I laugh at them For now I realise my love was untrue

Nanshe 23-Feb-03/9:17 PM
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