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20 most recent comments by daniella (21-40)

Re: beef flavored ramen by ThePariahDog 28-Feb-04/7:57 PM
ramen, a true staple i can warm to from my college days, instant satisfaction in neutral browns with little celebrations of veggies in bright re-hydrated hues.
Re: without you by ThePariahDog 28-Feb-04/8:00 PM
dont tether yourself to rhyming... let go...
Re: godhead by ThePariahDog 28-Feb-04/8:01 PM
there you go... gettin down and gritty
Re: real folk blues by ThePariahDog 28-Feb-04/8:02 PM
i still see some clay here...
Re: advice by ThePariahDog 28-Feb-04/8:05 PM
first utterings... tuff stuff... i know where this comes from, so i know where you can definitely take this wisdom you are scratching at.
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Feb-04/8:32 PM
correct and keen. i just would like to vibrate more... but this is the first i see of yours.
regarding some deleted poem... 28-Feb-04/8:34 PM
this is where i would dwell... until your tears,
a million salty spheres,
rain cold upon the ground.
Re: Nature Of The Day by impert&ent 29-Feb-04/4:50 PM
brilliantly pieced together from bits of sound, thought, pictures, words and whole lives given in one instance over the phone, over a misunderstanding which begain in a safeway and ended with the presence of angels.
Re: The Path of Least Resistance by eliastemplar 22-May-04/8:34 PM
sounds good to me
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac 25-Jul-04/3:10 PM
are you asthmatic too?
Re: Deconstruction Of The Heart by impert&ent 16-Jun-05/7:05 PM
you are a deconstructionist, in a twist of taking down all that has fallen apart.
Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent 16-Jun-05/8:20 PM
i like reading your mind
Re: These are not just words by impert&ent 16-Jun-05/8:23 PM
Words are not meant to persuade
But to convey... perfect synthesis.

Re: Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent 16-Jun-05/8:25 PM
and i miss reading your heart
Re: the space between by impert&ent 16-Jun-05/8:27 PM
there should be an inhalation at the end of these lines.
Re: Fourteen Years by impert&ent 16-Jun-05/8:29 PM
as in bowls me over bowls
Re: 11th September (a senyru) by scitz 19-Oct-06/4:11 AM
9/11 was an inside job.
connect all the mind boggling dots at:
www.loosechange911.com/index_main.html
wake up america
Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella 20-May-07/8:22 PM
i would edit it, but then lose all ur comments... so it stays as is. but thanx for the feedback!
Re: broken bottles by richa 20-May-07/8:33 PM
it's a barren landscape.
i love: brimming with storm but no rejoicing. it makes no sense, but sings.
Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus! 20-May-07/9:19 PM
There are some misconceptions here, that make the zealous hodge podge verses sting even more.
God did not make our lives to be worthless.
His enemies may have killed Jesus, but according to the New Testament, this was part of God's plan... How else could he have fulfilled the passion?
And lastly, because I want to go to sleep, you actually think we could actually hurt the greatest grandest architect...You think it matters if we believe or not??
Only to our own faith... God exists regardless of us, and He or She or whatever our creator is, does not need our votes.


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