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real folk blues (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
what's left to say?
save it for another day
tell me some other way
than this
i don't like it when you attack
everything i do behind my back
you're going to regret
this pain you've caused me
should it come from within?
or maybe from without?
you tell me
you're saying that i'm the one without remorse
ok, but at least i know how to feel my way through a bad situation
instead of blaming others for my own insecurities
liar
so why is it that i even care?
it must have been a glimpse of your hair
that i saw shimmering in the light
your image is the source of my plight
and agony measured beyond words
cuts borne from verbal assaults
that amass and swarm like birds
feasting on my heart
i'm trying to show you
you know i'm trying
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Posted: December 14, 2003 6:02 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2003 6:02 PM PST
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