beef flavored ramen

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Feb 2004 · 4 comments

barren i pour life into your carcass three minute companion join me for an afternoon busied by the flusters of the world endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice brown abyss what lies beneath the surface? floating buoys aptly distract my visual analysis yellow, orange, green styrofoam smirk! allow me to revel in your sweat for my lack of toil

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[10] zodiac 26-Feb-04/1:03 PM Reply

A truer sex poem was never written. "endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice" -10-

[8] Shuushin 27-Feb-04/7:53 PM Reply

good observations, well put.

[10] daniella 28-Feb-04/7:57 PM Reply

ramen, a true staple i can warm to from my college days, instant satisfaction in neutral browns with little celebrations of veggies in bright re-hydrated hues.

[9] http://mulberryfairy 22-Aug-07/6:18 PM Reply

mmm-mmm good