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beef flavored ramen (Free verse) by ThePariahDog barren
i pour life into your carcass
three minute companion
join me for an afternoon busied by the flusters of the world
endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice
brown abyss
what lies beneath the surface?
floating buoys aptly distract my visual analysis
yellow, orange, green
styrofoam smirk!
allow me to revel in your sweat
for my lack of toil
Up the ladder:
Nostalgia of Safe Days
Down the ladder:
Belgium and rose tears
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Posted: February 26, 2004 12:11 PM PST; Last modified: February 26, 2004 12:11 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.768404 Overall Rank: 1768 Comments:
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zodiac @ 67.240.192.97
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26-Feb-04/1:03 PM
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A truer sex poem was never written. "endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice" -10-
good observations, well put.
ramen, a true staple i can warm to from my college days, instant satisfaction in neutral browns with little celebrations of veggies in bright re-hydrated hues.
mmm-mmm good
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