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beef flavored ramen (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

barren i pour life into your carcass three minute companion join me for an afternoon busied by the flusters of the world endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice brown abyss what lies beneath the surface? floating buoys aptly distract my visual analysis yellow, orange, green styrofoam smirk! allow me to revel in your sweat for my lack of toil

zodiac 26-Feb-04/1:03 PM
A truer sex poem was never written. "endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice" -10-




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