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One dot.And the rest is our lives (Other) by Prince of Void
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Up the ladder: Garage sale

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.857143
Weighted score: 5.768404
Overall Rank: 1769
Posted: August 10, 2004 2:47 AM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2004 2:47 AM PDT
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[5] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 10-Aug-04/11:23 AM | Reply
Something to ponder for forty days and nights, inspiring.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.188 > Dovina | 10-Aug-04/11:46 PM | Reply
Thank u for ur comment i think u are right ..
but i believe more in subconscious
[n/a] zodiac @ 212.118.2.83 > Prince of Void | 11-Aug-04/7:08 AM | Reply
What are you talking about?
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.142 > zodiac | 11-Aug-04/10:08 AM | Reply
I am talking about the expreince u might have never experienced it ........sth beyond the words and senses....
[10] unknown^user @ 209.234.180.162 | 10-Aug-04/12:35 PM | Reply
More visual art than poetry, especially when taken in a poetic context, but powerful nonetheless.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.188 > unknown^user | 10-Aug-04/11:57 PM | Reply
i consider the concept as the heart of this poem
the concept is more important to me here
[10] tisa7 @ 4.14.129.6 | 11-Aug-04/5:26 PM | Reply
cool i get the dot
[10] Dark Angle @ 70.181.103.149 | 3-Dec-07/12:26 AM | Reply
It's like reading a surreal painting.
[10] Dark Angle @ 70.181.103.149 | 3-Dec-07/12:27 AM | Reply
Or maybe the mushrooms on my pizza went bad... or good, depending on what you look for in mushrooms.
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