Re: The dog that loved a chicken by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
5-Nov-03/2:03 AM |
excellent another person in a sorry state of mind.
although he got better at the end, he made up for it with the chicken.
Not really a poem though, maybe i should post "The Authelage" on here. tis a far greater tale.
i give you 10 for the wonderful images conjured during the last paragraph.
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Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian |
9-Nov-03/11:03 AM |
Read my poems about dogs retard. this poem is almost as rejected as nun jokes.
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and don't try and talk to me
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Re: Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
13-Nov-03/7:33 AM |
Liked the beginning, great stuff. Should have kept the initial happy note all the way through. Have you tried making love to geese as a method of cheering yourself up. ...7...
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Re: Plume Gateau by Bobjim |
30-Nov-03/3:25 PM |
Ok, which one of you 2 buggers has submitted this purile piece of crap in *MY* account?
Oh, wait stupid question.
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Re: Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8 |
30-Nov-03/3:26 PM |
This is a purile piece of shit. So is my work, I know, but mine is intentional.
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Re: voices on the bus by Crakyamuni |
30-Nov-03/3:34 PM |
Are you some sort of nut? Hearing voices means you need help, dumbass.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Nov-03/3:37 PM |
I read as far as the title, before I relised you certainly are.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Nov-03/3:38 PM |
MY PENIS!!
That's whats in the hands of Jesus.
Oh, yea, it's bollocks.
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Re: Bruce Lee is a Lotus Ninja by Shit-Crumpets |
30-Nov-03/3:39 PM |
Shut the fuck up you preteen tit. I bet you can't even get do the ninja moves on mortal kombat, let alone in your ( and I use this in the broadest possible term) 'life'.
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Re: . by Bobjim |
30-Nov-03/3:51 PM |
It's true you know. Anyone want to scratch my big, hairy balls? Anyone?
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Re: Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
1-Dec-03/3:16 AM |
I'm really down on my knee's this week, just for you Bob.
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Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 |
10-Dec-03/1:14 PM |
Average. Not nearly random or insane enough.
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Re: Under a better bed wetter by Shardik |
27-Jan-04/4:55 AM |
Two words:
Retard poem.
That is all.
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Re: Life by 47Ronin |
27-Jan-04/5:08 AM |
Excellent. Almost as good as my "Existence".
10
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Re: A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
4-Feb-04/1:38 AM |
I feel that this poem is written from your own personal experience.
Begone thou foul, once bearded reject.
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Re: Cutters Part II The Recut (Limerick Triplet) by Shardik |
3-Mar-04/7:19 AM |
If you're going to do bad poetry, do it properly. Still, a 7 for trying.
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Re: Lunacy by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
3-Mar-04/7:23 AM |
I like this one. I feel it could almost apply to me.
10
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regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Mar-04/10:24 AM |
Being mature is a bad thing. Immaturity is much more fun, so you're wrong.
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Re: post-rock messiah by jsd |
31-Mar-04/6:27 AM |
I was going to read this poem, but I got bored after the 3rd line. Still, I'll give you a 5 for trying.
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Re: Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig |
31-Mar-04/6:31 AM |
I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.
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