poemranker ::Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig

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Once Upon A Time ( a senyru )

by Mr Pig

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Mar 2004 · 2 comments

Once upon a time You slept next to me but love was just a dream.

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A favorite of Ice.

2 comments

[10] Shuushin 30-Mar-04/11:18 AM Reply
a thousand points for calling a duck a duck (senryu vs haiku).

tanka you.
[7] Bobjim 31-Mar-04/6:31 AM Reply
I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.