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Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) (Haiku) by Mr Pig
Once upon a time You slept next to me but love was just a dream.

Down the ladder: Facial Bliss

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6221
Posted: March 30, 2004 10:51 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2004 10:51 AM PST
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[10] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 30-Mar-04/11:18 AM | Reply
a thousand points for calling a duck a duck (senryu vs haiku).

tanka you.
[7] Bobjim @ 212.135.1.57 | 31-Mar-04/6:31 AM | Reply
I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.
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