Poemranker [Poem: Once Upon A Time ( a senyru )] [by Mr Pig] Thu Nov 21 08:34:40 PST 2024

Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Once upon a time You slept next to me but love was just a dream.

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Up the ladder: water damage

Down the ladder: "I" became "We"

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6220

Posted: March 30, 2004 10:51 AM PST; Last modified: March 30, 2004 10:51 AM PST
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Comments:

[10] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 30-Mar-04/11:18 AM | Reply

a thousand points for calling a duck a duck (senryu vs haiku).

tanka you.

[7] Bobjim @ 212.135.1.57 | 31-Mar-04/6:31 AM | Reply

I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.

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