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Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Once upon a time You slept next to me but love was just a dream.

Shuushin 30-Mar-04/11:18 AM
a thousand points for calling a duck a duck (senryu vs haiku).

tanka you.




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