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water damage (Free verse) by skaskowski her resurfacing,
rehearsed and hurting,
she set her sweet smile out
to dry.
her shirt disturbingly
sticking and syrupy,
she set her ashen arms out
to dry.
i must have forgotten
to ask her name, because
she set her larynx out
to dry.
and i think i saw her
sink back down after
she set her heavy head out
to dry.
Up the ladder:
IT All Starts With My Fears
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Once Upon A Time ( a senyru )
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Posted: December 15, 2003 12:46 AM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2003 12:46 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0896473 Overall Rank: 6219 Comments:
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richa @ 81.178.235.140
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16-Dec-03/6:49 AM
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good play with words, needs more though
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