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water damage (Free verse) by skaskowski
her resurfacing, rehearsed and hurting, she set her sweet smile out to dry. her shirt disturbingly sticking and syrupy, she set her ashen arms out to dry. i must have forgotten to ask her name, because she set her larynx out to dry. and i think i saw her sink back down after she set her heavy head out to dry.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6225
Posted: December 15, 2003 12:46 AM PST; Last modified: December 15, 2003 12:46 AM PST
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[8] richa @ 81.178.235.140 | 16-Dec-03/6:49 AM | Reply
good play with words, needs more though
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