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water damage

Member since 2001 · Posted 15 Dec 2003 · 1 comment

her resurfacing, rehearsed and hurting, she set her sweet smile out to dry. her shirt disturbingly sticking and syrupy, she set her ashen arms out to dry. i must have forgotten to ask her name, because she set her larynx out to dry. and i think i saw her sink back down after she set her heavy head out to dry.

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[8] richa 16-Dec-03/6:49 AM Reply
good play with words, needs more though