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On the Space of Indifference (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Wasting time in estimation
Following improvisation
Let it out and let it quick
Panoramic motion sick
Squirreling into observation
Breaking through life's aberrations
Cut by razored asterisks
Drowning love in politics
Cumberbuns and caster oil
Wrapped in guilt and demon spoils
Burning down the house they molded
Blackened by the lies they folded
Winnebago number eight
Fossilized on Darwin's plate
Swiftly states the hurricane
That no more life means no more pain
Riding in a railroad freight
Headphones make my head sedate
Sweating glass and bleeding smoke
Masked by an obdurate cloak
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6224
Posted: July 10, 2004 9:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2004 7:46 AM PDT
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