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On the Space of Indifference (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Wasting time in estimation Following improvisation Let it out and let it quick Panoramic motion sick Squirreling into observation Breaking through life's aberrations Cut by razored asterisks Drowning love in politics Cumberbuns and caster oil Wrapped in guilt and demon spoils Burning down the house they molded Blackened by the lies they folded Winnebago number eight Fossilized on Darwin's plate Swiftly states the hurricane That no more life means no more pain Riding in a railroad freight Headphones make my head sedate Sweating glass and bleeding smoke Masked by an obdurate cloak

Down the ladder: "I" became "We"

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6221
Posted: July 10, 2004 9:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2004 7:46 AM PDT
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[8] MR Blobby @ 62.31.23.30 | 11-Jul-04/12:57 AM | Reply
blobby blob!!
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