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On the Space of Indifference

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jul 2004 · Edited 11 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

Wasting time in estimation Following improvisation Let it out and let it quick Panoramic motion sick Squirreling into observation Breaking through life's aberrations Cut by razored asterisks Drowning love in politics Cumberbuns and caster oil Wrapped in guilt and demon spoils Burning down the house they molded Blackened by the lies they folded Winnebago number eight Fossilized on Darwin's plate Swiftly states the hurricane That no more life means no more pain Riding in a railroad freight Headphones make my head sedate Sweating glass and bleeding smoke Masked by an obdurate cloak

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[8] MR Blobby 11-Jul-04/12:57 AM Reply
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