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Homecoming (Free verse) by http://mulberryfairy
The rental carâs spinning wheels
were greeted by Interstate 40
with the smooth invitation of a
well kept, gumless Skate Odyssey.
The tar gleamed, impeccable,
histrionically revealing
the contrast of newly painted lines
which called me, hissing,
âCome on, this wayâ
like siren arrows.
I recaptured my gaze
in time to see one pig snout
penetrating a truckâs cage
like a flasher.
Looking up, I saw more,
an infinity of snouts, curly tails,
and flapping pink ears
popping through the bars of
their speeding pigpen.
The ears waved, beckoning,
âWelcome, itâs safe here.â
A sign reported, matter-of-factly,
âLittering is illegalâ
â$1000 fine maxâ.
Just ahead, a few dozen teams of
dark skinned Black and Latino workers
stuffed poles full of litter into white trash bags
under the shade of a âNatural Lightâ billboard.
Identical uniforms (olive pants, bleached white shirts)
were covered by fluorescent orange and yellow vests
which drew attention to Black lettering across their backs
identifying their rank and class: âInmateâ.
They, too, recognized me,
I saw them wink their assurance as the car passed,
ruffling the orange mesh of their vests
while their white and gold teeth glinted in the sun.
The brilliant blue of the Pepsi Cola bottling plant,
the always dilapidated look of ML King Jr. Drive
finally led me to the glowing centerpieces-
the angry middle fingers of Winston-Salem;
the former Wachoviaâs phallus building
and the tall, narrow brick smokestacks
boldly labeled âRJ Reynoldsâ
my Alma Matter.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6226
Posted: October 23, 2003 8:30 PM PDT; Last modified: October 23, 2003 8:30 PM PDT
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You must write short (or long) fiction!
You are right, I should be writing short fiction. I, too, am aware of the falseness of the label "free verse" when I am writing prose, but I try to "pass" if you know what I mean.