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Troubled Mind (Free verse) by DarkThirteens I love the rain.
Listening to the rain ouside
while I lay on my bed.
Pitter-Pat-Pat-Pat.
So soft. So soothing.
Pitter-Pat-Pat-Pat.
then the main course comes...
Boom!
Crash!
I shiver as the lights in my house flicker.
A streak runs across my face like a scar.
I sink away from my world and come back ro reality.
Up the ladder:
A Time
Down the ladder:
The Unforgiven II
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Posted: February 20, 2004 10:12 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2004 10:12 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0896473 Overall Rank: 6218 Comments:
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devina @ 195.5.74.5
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21-Feb-04/3:58 AM
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I don´t know what to say actually!
This is perfectly alright.
ooo tis marvelous!! I luvs the whole scar across your face ting. i adore thunder storms haha. hinkoo muchly for the comment and votey mon ^.^
tanky **bites**
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