poemranker ::Troubled Mind by DarkThirteens

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Free verse № 90974

Troubled Mind

by DarkThirteens

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Feb 2004 · 4 comments

I love the rain. Listening to the rain ouside while I lay on my bed. Pitter-Pat-Pat-Pat. So soft. So soothing. Pitter-Pat-Pat-Pat. then the main course comes... Boom! Crash! I shiver as the lights in my house flicker. A streak runs across my face like a scar. I sink away from my world and come back ro reality.

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4 comments

[4] devina 21-Feb-04/3:58 AM Reply
I don´t know what to say actually!
[7] richa 22-Feb-04/5:18 AM Reply
This is perfectly alright.
[8] **bites your ear** 22-Mar-04/10:11 PM Reply
ooo tis marvelous!! I luvs the whole scar across your face ting. i adore thunder storms haha. hinkoo muchly for the comment and votey mon ^.^
[n/a] DarkThirteens › **bites your ear** 10-Apr-04/4:25 PM Reply
tanky **bites**