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Troubled Mind (Free verse) by DarkThirteens

I love the rain. Listening to the rain ouside while I lay on my bed. Pitter-Pat-Pat-Pat. So soft. So soothing. Pitter-Pat-Pat-Pat. then the main course comes... Boom! Crash! I shiver as the lights in my house flicker. A streak runs across my face like a scar. I sink away from my world and come back ro reality.

devina 21-Feb-04/3:58 AM
I don´t know what to say actually!




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