Re: I'm Not A Poet by JuddNelson	22-Jul-02/4:23 PM
I know that feeling.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	22-Jul-02/4:10 PM
I actually do neither of those things. Your email doesn't work.
Re: The Sea by venusdemilo	22-Jul-02/3:36 PM
The sea is full of plankton, though.Your mind clearly isn't.I like this.
Re: Walls by razorgrin	22-Jul-02/3:21 PM
I'm not an intern.
Re: Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw	22-Jul-02/2:22 PM
Mighty Good.
Re: Stranger by mytenderrage	22-Jul-02/1:49 PM
Gloom 'n' woe. I getcha. Your life is a dark closet of darkness. "Ve ah nihilists.Ve beleef in nuthink"-the big lebowski.
Re: Suffocating by mytenderrage	22-Jul-02/1:46 PM
Dear god! The angst! It's attacking!!GAAAAHHHH!Run!Save yourselves!
Re: One Nation Under God by GAC	22-Jul-02/1:43 PM
When I first read this, I thought you were being sarcastic. "This is great",I thought.Imagine my disappointment as I found you were serious about this tripe. The killings, hatred and violence done in the name of this masochistic death-cult must end!Besides, everyone knows god went nuts, did a lot of mescalin and moved to australia in 1965.He doesn't care anymore.goes by the name Jorge von Scheissekopf now, I think.you make me slightly nauseous.toodles.
Re: R'lyeh by razorgrin	22-Jul-02/1:20 PM
Actually, I'm an a cup. Hardly 15 pounds. I don't like scones. If you could afford it, would you be a scientologist?
Re: i dreamt i spoke by roses are read	22-Jul-02/10:25 AM
great imagery.
Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin	20-Jul-02/12:17 PM
whoopty-do, you were on smack and in prison. that doesn't make you "deep" or "gritty", that makes you a fuckup. Actually I work for the government, I'm just based in the mall and i'm paid exceedingly well for it. I simply felt like telling a story not about me and I didn't feel like writing endless paragraphs about necrophilic sex.Writing about your immense pain is all well and good but it gets tedious as all fuck after a while, especially for the reader. I personally would rather write about a variety of things.And what the hell is your issue with Canada anyway??We have been voted the best place in the world to live.And the States are..gunfucking rednecks, pedophile murderers, polygamous snakehandlers and Michael Jackson. Seriously, though, you're one to talk about real jobs.Actor, musician, junkie your resume is truly impressive. Try thinking outside your personal experience, it might help your writing.Emphasis on might.
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	19-Jul-02/2:58 PM
truly my heart has been warmed.
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	19-Jul-02/2:55 PM
thanks, by the way. i thoght of it while I was eating and almost choked to death laughing.
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	19-Jul-02/2:54 PM
I'm promoted from what, o seraphim with scatological tasts?
Re: Ocean's Passing by forestchild7	19-Jul-02/2:17 PM
we'll talk of shoes and ships and sealing-wax, of cabbages and kings...
Re: The pretty girls by sunfloweronfire	19-Jul-02/1:27 PM
and you, unlike them, won't sleep with a billion assholes and wind up with an embarrassing disease or a kid. Also, you can likely look forward to growing older without monthly boobjobs and so many facelifts that you resemble a sphincter. here's a hint: water thrown to the face makes mascara run, blinding them and leaving you free to pop their inflato-falsies with a pin.
Re: Eyes, Crying. by LucidRevelation	19-Jul-02/12:07 PM
must be difficult to moan silently..
Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o	19-Jul-02/12:00 PM
Laid not layed.A barren grave would be...an empty hole?
Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan	19-Jul-02/11:58 AM
I partially disagree with DA on this one.You post them for attention.you cut because you're sad. I understand the feeling though. It will get better.
Re: Cut by TheVampireLeStan	19-Jul-02/11:56 AM
cutting oneself is overrated.then you're left with a bunch of stupid-looking scars, like a bad tattoo. Better to distact yourself till the need to slash yourself up subsides.