| Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage |
29-Jul-02/4:33 PM |
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i think what DA is saying is that you can't write worth shit, which is true. not only is the poem a collection of hackneyed angst, but it's badly written. as for your "feelings" argument, i'm sure you think that your emotions are valid (awww...you think you matter!)the fact remains that we don't care that someone dumped your whiny ass and you're bitching and moaning about it.
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| Re: Dead Eye by kthulah |
29-Jul-02/4:29 PM |
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I like it.it's fun to say aloud.mmmmm...tentacley.cthulhu fhtagn.
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| Re: So Cold by mytenderrage |
29-Jul-02/4:25 PM |
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you're cold and alone because nobody like you, sweetness.that is because you're a whiny, self-absorbed little fuck.
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| Re: Perfect by mytenderrage |
29-Jul-02/4:23 PM |
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stay in your dark corner.forever.
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| Re: My Angel by mytenderrage |
29-Jul-02/4:22 PM |
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you blithering ass! ANGELS!!!!!Your work is always shit, but this one takes the(devil's food)cake. of all the cliched crap, you write about angels. you should be flayed with a dull knife, dragged over carpet tacks and dipped in rubbing alcohol. thank you, you waste of oxygen.
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| Re: My Angel by emilys369 |
27-Jul-02/4:39 PM |
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Horus most certainly did not! I did! angels..why not succubi or goblins?of all the cheesy, hackneyed shite...angels.the next angel poem i see, i'm hunting down the author and eating their internal organs, raw and dripping out of thier body cavity.
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| Re: Night Work by forestchild7 |
27-Jul-02/4:31 PM |
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I dunno..my night's work tends to involve a crowbar, a shovel and the nearest cemetary....
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| Re: The Service by forestchild7 |
27-Jul-02/4:30 PM |
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why angels? of all the New Agey crap, why angels? fook, i say.
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| Re: The Watching Brother by forestchild7 |
27-Jul-02/4:29 PM |
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my Great Mother is Kali..who's yours?
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| Re: So by Bazilla |
27-Jul-02/8:12 AM |
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get a dart gun. keep it by wherever you sit to watch tv. it's almost as satisfying as the real thing and you go through less tvs. you forgot the other dwarves: chesty, herpy, and scummy.
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| Re: On an Honest Day's Wages and Other Matters of Particle Physics by robustyoungsoul |
27-Jul-02/8:08 AM |
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sooooo good. I want to buy you slushies.
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| Re: Memories by DevilTmptrss |
27-Jul-02/8:05 AM |
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remember sweetie: better to have loved and lost than to have to throw the fucker's dismemberd carcass into a ravine.
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| Re: My Angel by emilys369 |
26-Jul-02/10:22 AM |
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| Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 |
26-Jul-02/6:42 AM |
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if you wrote that drunk, drink more. it's damn good. liver be damned!
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| Re: My Torcher Chamber by angel born in hell |
26-Jul-02/6:30 AM |
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don't ever leave that place. not even for food. learn to spell.
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| Re: Ode to Crushed Ice by emilyowey |
26-Jul-02/6:28 AM |
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slushies make life worth living.
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| Re: Black Hearted Graffiti Writer by mogwai |
26-Jul-02/6:07 AM |
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| Re: Heaven vs. Hell by angel born in hell |
26-Jul-02/6:05 AM |
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Learn to spell, you self-pitying rectal tick. Kill yourself now and save me the effort.This is one of the most cliched, angsty pieces of fecal matter ever written.Aww...you're depressed because ...your vacant boyfriend dumped you? the other kiddies at the local goth club totally ignored you? some person you fucked saw you in good light and won't speak to you?grow up kid.Also, "angel born in hell" that is the most idiotic, pseudo-deep alias ever. You and the legions like you make poets look bad.
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| Re: Little Miss Ogyny by [mojo] |
24-Jul-02/1:15 PM |
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A really pathetic guy I knew called himself Miss Understood during his transsexual phase. though he made a really bad woman, he made a worse man.
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| Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 |
24-Jul-02/1:13 PM |
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i think this is brilliant. i think.
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