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My Path (Free verse) by badbilly6932
On the road that I have taken,one day, walking,I awaken,amazed to see where I have come,where I,m going,where I,m from. This is not the path I thought.This is not the place I sought.This is not the dream I bought, just a fever of fate I,ve caught. I,ll change highways in a while,at the crossroads,one more mile.My path is lit by my own fire.I,m only going where I desire. On the road that I have taken,one day,walking,I awaken.One day,walking,I awaken,on the road that I have taken.

Up the ladder: Promises
Down the ladder: Dream Walker

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.625
Weighted score: 4.6302056
Overall Rank: 12413
Posted: July 11, 2002 7:17 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 7:30 PM PDT
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[3] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jul-02/6:50 PM | Reply
Scrolling sideways gets me king kong pissed and not to mention more eager to see where it's all going(cuz of the artiness, and all) but i got screwed again. Vertical, horizontal, pointless
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.170 | 23-Jul-02/5:55 AM | Reply
horus is right, scrolling sideways blows bishops.
[7] titan69 @ 195.93.48.168 | 8-Aug-02/12:32 PM | Reply
thats a long poem!!!!! 7/10
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