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Black Hearted Graffiti Writer (Free verse) by mogwai
You tag telegraph poles with black love hearts that mark the path to her house. When you bought the spraypaint you knew they would think you?re too old to use them for graffiti. You still felt nervous anyway. You tag telegraph poles with black love hearts. You?re too old for graffiti. Black love hearts. One every block on the path to her door. You?re too old for graffiti. You?re too old for love. She?ll probably never notice anyway.

Down the ladder: The Spankbox

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12809
Posted: May 19, 2002 6:23 AM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2002 6:23 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] hoopoe @ 62.254.32.4 | 19-May-02/6:36 AM | Reply
I like this
caught a movement of spirit
and watched it whirl
[7] nentwined @ 66.47.71.146 | 10-Jul-02/4:12 PM | Reply
very cute. :)
[7] deleted user @ 66.8.154.13 | 25-Jul-02/10:38 PM | Reply
has a nice balance of sentiment, image, and originality.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.149 | 26-Jul-02/6:07 AM | Reply
that is so sweet.
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