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Free verse № 6160

The Spankbox

by Garrett S Sexton

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

Nominated for eviction, snake in the grass, eight whores in heaven all virgins to the last. Cherries, wine and roses, all whipped are my eyes, shower me with pleasure, a reign of pain they devise. Gifted are the slaven that they let one slip in, A head full of flies, drugged full of sin. Martyred is the sinner for sins you cannot cast Pleasure is pain, the rest is tits and arse.

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[8] horus8 26-Jul-02/4:20 PM Reply
okay so you are good, but can you balance breast milk around the brim of your hat Mr. sexton. p.s. if u live near melrose and mansfield u can come by tonight and read your piece then throw a midget for a prize. nine lives. whiskey. fuckshorts. Abyss. asp. cleopatra
[4] nentwined 31-Jul-02/4:46 AM Reply
good flow. umm. I don't get "slaven". and "pain they devise" feels like one syllable too many. and I really don't get the hell what you're saying, if you are saying anything...
[1] Robert K Foster 5-Dec-02/7:30 AM Reply
the last line is inconsistant and base. it interrupts the flow and tone.
[n/a] Bachus › Robert K Foster 8-Dec-02/12:14 PM Reply
shut up!
[n/a] Bachus 8-Dec-02/12:15 PM Reply
great title. too bad nobody cares.