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The Spankbox (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton
Nominated for eviction, snake in the grass, eight whores in heaven all virgins to the last. Cherries, wine and roses, all whipped are my eyes, shower me with pleasure, a reign of pain they devise. Gifted are the slaven that they let one slip in, A head full of flies, drugged full of sin. Martyred is the sinner for sins you cannot cast Pleasure is pain, the rest is tits and arse.

Down the ladder: Thunder

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.5
Overall Rank: 12810
Posted: July 26, 2002 3:50 PM PDT; Last modified: July 26, 2002 3:50 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Jul-02/4:20 PM | Reply
okay so you are good, but can you balance breast milk around the brim of your hat Mr. sexton. p.s. if u live near melrose and mansfield u can come by tonight and read your piece then throw a midget for a prize. nine lives. whiskey. fuckshorts. Abyss. asp. cleopatra
[4] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 31-Jul-02/4:46 AM | Reply
good flow. umm. I don't get "slaven". and "pain they devise" feels like one syllable too many. and I really don't get the hell what you're saying, if you are saying anything...
[1] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.1 | 5-Dec-02/7:30 AM | Reply
the last line is inconsistant and base. it interrupts the flow and tone.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Robert K Foster | 8-Dec-02/12:14 PM | Reply
shut up!
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Dec-02/12:15 PM | Reply
great title. too bad nobody cares.
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