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Thunder (Other) by Normo Boom
The sky's angry
People jump
Startled
A flash
A crashing sounds
People startled? Not this time...
They were expecting it
Up the ladder:
The Spankbox
Down the ladder:
Light Entertainment
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Posted: September 29, 2002 5:33 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2002 5:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.5 Overall Rank: 12806 Comments:
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Mutant_X @ 212.138.47.15
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29-Sep-02/5:40 AM
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it's smart to express self-emptiness by describing the crowd outside
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Normo @ 212.159.89.111
> Mutant_X
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10-Oct-02/6:05 AM
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Im sure it is
Dear God.
Is that the best comment you could come up with, you could had at least tell me whats wrong with it.
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