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20 most recent comments by razorgrin (701-720) and replies

Re: A Glitter ring trip to Fance (Whats on your Picobird) by ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/6:03 AM
yay! boobies!
Re: a comment on School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/6:03 AM
schoolgirls rock the universe. Especially with purple hair in pigtails and a spiked collar.
Re: Walls by razorgrin 31-Jul-02/4:45 PM
I think DA works for the guvmint. they hook 'im up to tubes and wires and say that it's for a secret giant robot project like Evangelion, but with all the probing and cameras involved, i suspect it's really just making fetish vids for republican senators.the code name is project sticky white book.
Re: Walls by razorgrin 31-Jul-02/4:19 PM
I do indeed write short stories, though it's been some months.I'm still at work.
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8 31-Jul-02/3:50 PM
this is mighty good.mighty.
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage 30-Jul-02/8:47 AM
and to whom in particular do you address this sad little retort?
Re: Poem Ranker by abecedarian 30-Jul-02/7:51 AM
bloody fantastic!
Re: Master Chef by Takay Shitar 30-Jul-02/7:36 AM
yummy.reminds me of my triumph: expired fake nutella on stale bread.deelish!
Re: To You, In Warmer Climes by <~> 30-Jul-02/7:35 AM
pretty:)
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage 30-Jul-02/6:22 AM
Blugirl, though you have not as of yet posted any of your doubtlessly brilliant works, thus far you seem as vacant as raven18.you should be together, possibly on a faraway island or space, where no one can hear you mope.
Re: Mobile home agenda by Bachus 30-Jul-02/6:00 AM
actually, horus darling, it reminds me of your work quite a bit.in the future, i'd rather you didn't make assumptions about what i'd enjoy, my suntanned amigo. about the poem...um....i like the D&D mention.that's about it.
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage 29-Jul-02/4:33 PM
i think what DA is saying is that you can't write worth shit, which is true. not only is the poem a collection of hackneyed angst, but it's badly written. as for your "feelings" argument, i'm sure you think that your emotions are valid (awww...you think you matter!)the fact remains that we don't care that someone dumped your whiny ass and you're bitching and moaning about it.
Re: So Cold by mytenderrage 29-Jul-02/4:25 PM
you're cold and alone because nobody like you, sweetness.that is because you're a whiny, self-absorbed little fuck.
Re: Perfect by mytenderrage 29-Jul-02/4:23 PM
stay in your dark corner.forever.
Re: My Angel by mytenderrage 29-Jul-02/4:22 PM
you blithering ass! ANGELS!!!!!Your work is always shit, but this one takes the(devil's food)cake. of all the cliched crap, you write about angels. you should be flayed with a dull knife, dragged over carpet tacks and dipped in rubbing alcohol. thank you, you waste of oxygen.
Re: My Angel by emilys369 27-Jul-02/4:39 PM
Horus most certainly did not! I did! angels..why not succubi or goblins?of all the cheesy, hackneyed shite...angels.the next angel poem i see, i'm hunting down the author and eating their internal organs, raw and dripping out of thier body cavity.
Re: Night Work by forestchild7 27-Jul-02/4:31 PM
I dunno..my night's work tends to involve a crowbar, a shovel and the nearest cemetary....
Re: The Service by forestchild7 27-Jul-02/4:30 PM
why angels? of all the New Agey crap, why angels? fook, i say.
Re: The Watching Brother by forestchild7 27-Jul-02/4:29 PM
my Great Mother is Kali..who's yours?
Re: So by Bazilla 27-Jul-02/8:12 AM
get a dart gun. keep it by wherever you sit to watch tv. it's almost as satisfying as the real thing and you go through less tvs. you forgot the other dwarves: chesty, herpy, and scummy.


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