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The Sanctified Surrealist (Free verse) by Ketiak
Carry sense, indescribable elation of invigorating invitations. Back there => Leap to the essence, easy breathing. easy weeping. I make it happen through Him. Love beyond life. Summon, not Golem but Him. I want coal to cleanse, purge me to see. See you. Fake not, want not. Every make a maker's dream. Love You. Love You. Love You.

Up the ladder: I'll Miss You
Down the ladder: When the morning sun arises

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1111112
Weighted score: 4.0555553
Overall Rank: 13338
Posted: July 9, 2002 7:57 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 7:57 PM PDT
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[2] deleted user @ 66.136.246.32 | 23-Jul-02/9:27 AM | Reply
please someone explain this poem, for I do not get it.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.170 | 23-Jul-02/9:34 AM | Reply
can't help you there, kipahni..I like the bit with the Golem, though.
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 23-Jul-02/2:20 PM | Reply
It's obviously a television in a t.v in a fishtank drawing of god's left testicle accompanied by the sound of jesus shitting his loin cloth fifteen feet above his splattered minions you simpled minded twitss
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