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When the morning sun arises

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Jul 2002 · 0 comments

When the morning sun arises And twinkles in the dew, What my conciousness suprises Is looking on the eyes of you. When winter snow is falling And all is cathedral hush, Then comes the birds a' calling, All singing of your blush. But when the dusk approaches Like a curling cat it lies, It on my thoughts encroaches And I recall little but your sighs.

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