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When the morning sun arises (Lyric) by Oddsboy
When the morning sun arises And twinkles in the dew, What my conciousness suprises Is looking on the eyes of you. When winter snow is falling And all is cathedral hush, Then comes the birds a' calling, All singing of your blush. But when the dusk approaches Like a curling cat it lies, It on my thoughts encroaches And I recall little but your sighs.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1111112
Weighted score: 4.0555553
Overall Rank: 13334
Posted: July 11, 2002 12:46 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 12:46 PM PDT
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