Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin	20-Jul-02/12:17 PM
whoopty-do, you were on smack and in prison. that doesn't make you "deep" or "gritty", that makes you a fuckup. Actually I work for the government, I'm just based in the mall and i'm paid exceedingly well for it. I simply felt like telling a story not about me and I didn't feel like writing endless paragraphs about necrophilic sex.Writing about your immense pain is all well and good but it gets tedious as all fuck after a while, especially for the reader. I personally would rather write about a variety of things.And what the hell is your issue with Canada anyway??We have been voted the best place in the world to live.And the States are..gunfucking rednecks, pedophile murderers, polygamous snakehandlers and Michael Jackson. Seriously, though, you're one to talk about real jobs.Actor, musician, junkie your resume is truly impressive. Try thinking outside your personal experience, it might help your writing.Emphasis on might.
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	19-Jul-02/2:58 PM
truly my heart has been warmed.
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	19-Jul-02/2:55 PM
thanks, by the way. i thoght of it while I was eating and almost choked to death laughing.
Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin	19-Jul-02/2:54 PM
I'm promoted from what, o seraphim with scatological tasts?
Re: Ocean's Passing by forestchild7	19-Jul-02/2:17 PM
we'll talk of shoes and ships and sealing-wax, of cabbages and kings...
Re: The pretty girls by sunfloweronfire	19-Jul-02/1:27 PM
and you, unlike them, won't sleep with a billion assholes and wind up with an embarrassing disease or a kid. Also, you can likely look forward to growing older without monthly boobjobs and so many facelifts that you resemble a sphincter. here's a hint: water thrown to the face makes mascara run, blinding them and leaving you free to pop their inflato-falsies with a pin.
Re: Eyes, Crying. by LucidRevelation	19-Jul-02/12:07 PM
must be difficult to moan silently..
Re: the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o	19-Jul-02/12:00 PM
Laid not layed.A barren grave would be...an empty hole?
Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan	19-Jul-02/11:58 AM
I partially disagree with DA on this one.You post them for attention.you cut because you're sad. I understand the feeling though. It will get better.
Re: Cut by TheVampireLeStan	19-Jul-02/11:56 AM
cutting oneself is overrated.then you're left with a bunch of stupid-looking scars, like a bad tattoo. Better to distact yourself till the need to slash yourself up subsides.
Re: The Wrong Choice by TheVampireLeStan	19-Jul-02/11:53 AM
there's always the method of rubbing yourself with bbq sauce and leaping into the middle of the hyena cage at the zoo.or for that matter, one could try by mixing all of the cleaning fluids in the house up in the blender and making oneself a yummy smoothie...
Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum	18-Jul-02/10:20 AM
right on.
Re: 13 Pianos (after Wallace Stevens) by jconnors3	18-Jul-02/9:09 AM
the piano ahs been drinking again (not me). at least so says tom waits.
Re: Why we're here by ARTIE	18-Jul-02/9:07 AM
Also, that's nowhere near a haiku.
Re: Why we're here by ARTIE	18-Jul-02/9:06 AM
no,silly1 We're here to make muffins.They can't make themselves, so we're here to lovingly mix and bake them.
Re: Human Heart by snowing	18-Jul-02/6:09 AM
we know.we just don't care. toughen up, sweetheart, or you'll spend your life in a pile of kleenex chrysanthemums.
Re: This Strange Feeling by snowing	18-Jul-02/6:07 AM
you only get a 4.That 4 is because I like bunnies.the poem otherwise is sappy and dull.
Re: A Verse of Utopia by kidz	18-Jul-02/5:53 AM
if there is, we'd get bored of bliss and start messing with people to liven things up.stick things into people's orifices while they sleep, give each other wedgies, secretly add tabasco to tubes of lube.so in answer, no.
Re: Clit by unknown	17-Jul-02/11:03 AM
Find it.Quickly.Ask her to show you.
Re: she wonders, by <~>	17-Jul-02/11:01 AM
If he isn't naturally inclined to, it's never to hard to make them do what you'd like..