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A Verse of Utopia (Free verse) by kidz
Is there a place in heaven - may be - that fire will not burn hate will not turn and we will always love each other in turn

Up the ladder: apparitions of the city
Down the ladder: Swollowed and Gone

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10596
Posted: July 17, 2002 5:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 17, 2002 5:21 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 62.190.174.80 | 17-Jul-02/5:26 PM | Reply
Nope.
[6] -=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.90.112 | 17-Jul-02/10:11 PM | Reply
good, but it gave me the clap
[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Jul-02/10:26 PM | Reply
Yeah, and all of your ancestors are there eating and drinking and singing with the angels on streets of gold. Hugging lions. petting snakes. lOOK LOOK ISN'T EVERYBODY SO GOD DAMN HAPPY.. I'd turn all right. turn around and get the fuck outta theree
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.106.83 | 18-Jul-02/5:53 AM | Reply
if there is, we'd get bored of bliss and start messing with people to liven things up.stick things into people's orifices while they sleep, give each other wedgies, secretly add tabasco to tubes of lube.so in answer, no.
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