poemranker ::the rose layed on the barren grave by josh_5o

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Free verse № 5312

the rose layed on the barren grave

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

The rose layed on the barren grave. The lily floating on the slimy swamp. The rain drop falling on the sun dried desert. The melody heard by deaf ears. The light seen by blind eyes. The warmth felt by cold, trembling hands. The map found by the lost soul. The sunrise ending the lonesome night. The faint voice heard in silence. The God that was all this to me.

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4 comments

[2] razorgrin 19-Jul-02/12:00 PM Reply
Laid not layed.A barren grave would be...an empty hole?
[2] evergreen 19-Jul-02/7:24 PM Reply
laid... not layed, unless that was intentional.
[0] poetandknowit 29-Aug-02/10:58 PM Reply
Wow, look at that form!! Brillant poem!!
[6] Blindpoetry 21-Dec-03/7:07 PM Reply
I'm seeing alot of 'the's ... Try to lower the number of them and start your lines... uh.. differently.. :-D