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Ocean's Passing (Free verse) by forestchild7
Staring out to sea,
with the sun shining down,
while the waves lapp at my feet;
I feel relaxed and calm,
as if all my worries are gone.
The wind ruffles my hair,
and I enjoy the breeze.
No longer the seasons run,
only the elements of being near the sea.
The endless sea;
A million years old,
yet never changing.
It still follows a pattern,
that will continue after I have passed on.
As the sun sinks on the horizon,
I realize that life is beautiful,
and that this is what it is all about.
So come and relax with me by the sea-shore,
and we shall talk of many wondrous things.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.5965877
Overall Rank: 12536
Posted: July 7, 2002 12:56 PM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2002 2:14 PM PDT
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