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Ocean's Passing (Free verse) by forestchild7

Staring out to sea, with the sun shining down, while the waves lapp at my feet; I feel relaxed and calm, as if all my worries are gone. The wind ruffles my hair, and I enjoy the breeze. No longer the seasons run, only the elements of being near the sea. The endless sea; A million years old, yet never changing. It still follows a pattern, that will continue after I have passed on. As the sun sinks on the horizon, I realize that life is beautiful, and that this is what it is all about. So come and relax with me by the sea-shore, and we shall talk of many wondrous things.

amanda_dcosta 13-Dec-05/10:36 PM
Beautiful insight into what life is about.........."that will continue after I have passed on."
written well. - 9 -




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