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Remembered (Free verse) by Joyleaf
Under light made green by leaves, kissed by butterflies, you kept me safe. Comforted by unspoken love, I opened to the possibilty of an undiscovered future, and finally felt that I could bloom as beautifully as the flowers around me. In that moment of peace, you planted a tiny seed. Watered by patience and granted time, it has grown to be stronger than any blossom. Rooted deeply, the petals never fall and the season of butterfly kisses is everlasting.

Up the ladder: Ocean's Passing
Down the ladder: oasis

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.5965877
Overall Rank: 12532
Posted: July 21, 2002 7:53 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 7:53 AM PDT
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