Re: a comment on unsent by Bill Z Bub |
29-Jan-03/7:03 PM |
When you're right, you're right. Thankya kindly. Now get out thar and vote, pardner!
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Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar |
29-Jan-03/6:46 PM |
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Re: a comment on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
28-Jan-03/12:42 AM |
Mere coincidence my dear. My dislike of Crowe has nothing to do with you. You just happened to bring up the name. How could I be possesive of you? I don't know you. I don't know your name or what you look like or how old you are...
Just that you write divinely, and are very insightful. Thats it. It's four AM over here. I need to go to sleep. zzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Re: ku-4 by Crakyamuni |
27-Jan-03/9:30 PM |
"death friends" or "death, friends"? And what's so decent about passion?
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Re: a comment on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
27-Jan-03/9:23 PM |
It's about Alchemy. Western magical tradition. Nothing personal about it. In fact, it's a little impersonal.
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Re: a comment on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
27-Jan-03/6:10 PM |
Is this Movieranker now? I wouldn't call it a stinker, but it sure didn't deserve an Oscar. Neither did Crowe. That bearded bastard. Okay, I'm just being petty now. and jealous.
Oh, and the poem is good. It feels Hellenic.
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Re: Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
27-Jan-03/6:05 PM |
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Re: Nobody by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/5:55 PM |
enjoyable, evocative, and nifty. I saw the lonesome walker.
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Re: Emergency by Nicholas Jones |
27-Jan-03/5:49 PM |
Not bad. In fact, I like it. Quite a bit. Very good.
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Re: 3.85g by Crakyamuni |
25-Jan-03/7:08 PM |
liked the first two stanzas, but the second half lost me.
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Re: a comment on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub |
25-Jan-03/6:57 PM |
Since I've discovered this site, I've been writing like mad. I've been throwing up the stuff I see potential in to see what others think. Eventually I'll pare them down to the essentials, like I have with some.
Or I'll just toss them and start over. I think I may start writing prose.
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Re: Starving at Tiffany's by horus8 |
24-Jan-03/3:14 PM |
Here's a tongue-twister for ya:
Sven said "Ted,
send ten tents".
Ted said "Sven,
send ten cents".
When Sven sent
Ted ten cents,
Ted sent Sven
ten cent tents.
Try to say that one even once, I dares ya.
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Re: The Ode that never was by Shardik |
24-Jan-03/3:09 PM |
Neat-O, amusing, different, and worthy. Here's a nine, for the sake of the signs in Morse code.
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Re: Afterglow by Imperfections |
24-Jan-03/3:05 PM |
a burning sensation in the thigh region? You should see a doctor.
seriously though, not bad
so far.
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Re: Snowblind by horus8 |
23-Jan-03/2:05 PM |
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Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik |
23-Jan-03/1:57 PM |
I like the leaves of leather, but it should be SHOULD HAVE, not SHOULD OF.
That is all.
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Re: a comment on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub |
21-Jan-03/4:51 PM |
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I love getting any kind of feedback, and you always give me something. I should comment more on others work.
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Re: a comment on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub |
21-Jan-03/4:49 PM |
heh heh. I sure seem to like the word "rough". I use it in half my friggin' poems. Thanks for the enheartenment. I shall press on with this one...
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Re: nothing, as today by <~> |
21-Jan-03/1:46 PM |
interesting. I know how that goes, I do.
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Re: poemrancour by JakeBike |
21-Jan-03/11:52 AM |
Wow. What a fucking waste of time.
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