replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub
29 Jan 2003, 7:03 PM
When you're right, you're right. Thankya kindly. Now get out thar and vote, pardner!
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 6:46 PM
d'oh!
replying on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
28 Jan 2003, 12:42 AM
Mere coincidence my dear. My dislike of Crowe has nothing to do with you. You just happened to bring up the name. How could I be possesive of you? I don't know you. I don't know your name or what you look like or how old you are...
Just that you write divinely, and are very insightful. Thats it. It's four AM over here. I need to go to sleep. zzzzzzzzzzzzz
Just that you write divinely, and are very insightful. Thats it. It's four AM over here. I need to go to sleep. zzzzzzzzzzzzz
on ku-4 by Crakyamuni
27 Jan 2003, 9:30 PM
"death friends" or "death, friends"? And what's so decent about passion?
replying on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
27 Jan 2003, 9:23 PM
It's about Alchemy. Western magical tradition. Nothing personal about it. In fact, it's a little impersonal.
replying on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
27 Jan 2003, 6:10 PM
Is this Movieranker now? I wouldn't call it a stinker, but it sure didn't deserve an Oscar. Neither did Crowe. That bearded bastard. Okay, I'm just being petty now. and jealous.
Oh, and the poem is good. It feels Hellenic.
Oh, and the poem is good. It feels Hellenic.
on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
27 Jan 2003, 6:05 PM
rad.
on Nobody by Nicholas Jones
27 Jan 2003, 5:55 PM
enjoyable, evocative, and nifty. I saw the lonesome walker.
on Emergency by Nicholas Jones
27 Jan 2003, 5:49 PM
Not bad. In fact, I like it. Quite a bit. Very good.
on 3.85g by Crakyamuni
25 Jan 2003, 7:08 PM
liked the first two stanzas, but the second half lost me.
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
25 Jan 2003, 6:57 PM
Since I've discovered this site, I've been writing like mad. I've been throwing up the stuff I see potential in to see what others think. Eventually I'll pare them down to the essentials, like I have with some.
Or I'll just toss them and start over. I think I may start writing prose.
Or I'll just toss them and start over. I think I may start writing prose.
on Starving at Tiffany's by horus8
24 Jan 2003, 3:14 PM
Here's a tongue-twister for ya:
Sven said "Ted,
send ten tents".
Ted said "Sven,
send ten cents".
When Sven sent
Ted ten cents,
Ted sent Sven
ten cent tents.
Try to say that one even once, I dares ya.
Sven said "Ted,
send ten tents".
Ted said "Sven,
send ten cents".
When Sven sent
Ted ten cents,
Ted sent Sven
ten cent tents.
Try to say that one even once, I dares ya.
on The Ode that never was by Shardik
24 Jan 2003, 3:09 PM
Neat-O, amusing, different, and worthy. Here's a nine, for the sake of the signs in Morse code.
on Afterglow by Imperfections
24 Jan 2003, 3:05 PM
a burning sensation in the thigh region? You should see a doctor.
seriously though, not bad
so far.
seriously though, not bad
so far.
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
23 Jan 2003, 1:57 PM
I like the leaves of leather, but it should be SHOULD HAVE, not SHOULD OF.
That is all.
That is all.
replying on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub
21 Jan 2003, 4:51 PM
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I love getting any kind of feedback, and you always give me something. I should comment more on others work.
replying on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub
21 Jan 2003, 4:49 PM
heh heh. I sure seem to like the word "rough". I use it in half my friggin' poems. Thanks for the enheartenment. I shall press on with this one...
on nothing, as today by <~>
21 Jan 2003, 1:46 PM
interesting. I know how that goes, I do.
on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 11:52 AM
Wow. What a fucking waste of time.