| Re: fragile by Bill Z Bub |
21-Aug-03/8:27 PM |
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How odd. I try to edit this poem, and I get one of my other poems instead. WTF?
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| Re: The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz |
22-Aug-03/9:47 AM |
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22-Aug-03/9:49 AM |
Okay, this one is a bit of a mess. I need to cut it into two separate poems, and rewrite rewrite rewrite.
Its all very stream of conciousness, which is good for a start. But it ain't complete.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Aug-03/10:01 AM |
like a sorcerer's word.
drow.
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| Re: Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus |
22-Aug-03/10:06 AM |
"Poseidon's clams"!
For some reason, that made me laugh.
Nice try, but this doesn't work for me. Too awkward:
"what they hath doth"?
Some word choices don't fit this one.
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| Re: D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
22-Aug-03/10:10 AM |
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Not normally my thing, but that was damn funny.
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| Re: The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
22-Aug-03/10:11 AM |
but there is always distance between bodies.
always.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Aug-03/10:14 AM |
I'm not interested in being part of any Boy's Only club, dude.
Fuck that.
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| Re: Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus |
22-Aug-03/11:38 AM |
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| Re: deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub |
23-Aug-03/6:03 PM |
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Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
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23-Aug-03/7:21 PM |
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| Re: My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
25-Aug-03/7:35 PM |
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Good luck dude. Sock it to 'em.
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| Re: Laundry Day by impert&ent |
25-Aug-03/8:57 PM |
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25-Aug-03/9:27 PM |
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This one is pure self-indulgence, I think. Up on the ranker for one day only! Hurry and rank it now, before its gone... forever!
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| Re: no name by ~ska~ |
25-Aug-03/9:33 PM |
I refuse to worship the god of Job. And I was going to curse at you, but I realized you're probably just a very young silly person.
I have issues. Don't mind me.
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| Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8 |
28-Aug-03/2:46 PM |
I give the first half a ten, the second half a 7. That averages out to 8.5, and I'll round it up to 9.
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| Re: Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8 |
28-Aug-03/3:14 PM |
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But I'm still put off by the use of the N-word. Don't like it.
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| Re: Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
30-Aug-03/1:45 PM |
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I am offended by the use of the term "tarantula holes". Remove it immediately. __________8.3
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| Re: Three Brothers by EAger to Offend |
3-Sep-03/8:23 PM |
Three brothers... hmm...
...who are you?
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| Re: Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend |
3-Sep-03/8:39 PM |
And curse you sir, for writing a better poem. But I am currently reworking mine, and it shall resurface here...
Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/
ten, for splitting my arrow.
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