Re: Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend	4-Sep-03/1:58 PM
I was shocked to see this poem. Shocked that anyone here besides me would know about Porcupine Lake, Dead Man's Point and the Great Fire. I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title... I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky... Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-03/2:29 PM
It's either complete shit or pure genius. Or somewhere in the middle. Yes, somewhere. Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. No. Yes. Get me a bucket. I liked the final stanza. Certainly makes one search for hidden meanings and whatnot. Your insect rage becomes you. Hell in a headbasket.
Re: cold sonnet by <~>	4-Sep-03/3:05 PM
beauty.
Re: Night walker by INTRANSIT	4-Sep-03/6:15 PM
Not bad at'all.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-03/6:19 PM
From whimsey to horror. Excellent.
Re: When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy	5-Sep-03/8:49 PM
Amazing. This is a brilliant brilliant piece. I love it. Ten, ten, ten! Remembre, Jesu loves you, this I know, for the Bible tells me so. Why is Christianity labelled monotheistic if they worship a trinity?
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Sep-03/9:08 PM
Another follower of the God of Job. Thats just... ~YAWN~.
Re: (untitled) by http://bandgeek	6-Sep-03/5:05 PM
Just what did you do?
Re: Babelfish Poetry (II): Rendu plus Doux (Français) by Geschäftsreise	7-Sep-03/3:52 PM
brava! la terra che percorriamo non siamo solidi esso esitiamo come la memoria
Re: The empty room by INTRANSIT	7-Sep-03/7:21 PM
Changing comes to stays makes all the difference. Brava, signore! (Forget babelfish, I'm learning Italiano)
Re: On getting back by horus8	8-Sep-03/10:56 PM
Bello! beautiful, man. Imagery cut apart and stacked and exploded. Assimilated and studied and polished into a shiney black metal ball, just small enough to swallow.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Sep-03/11:01 PM
"the sky a sepulcher"... "as night pitches a canopy" Brava.
Re: An Offering to the Deity that is Me by razorgrin	9-Sep-03/9:07 AM
you're making me hungry. or is that the smell of my roommeates pancakes?
Re: I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin	9-Sep-03/9:12 AM
Ten, because I'm a horndog.
Re: How to sleep sitting up by Bachus	9-Sep-03/1:42 PM
And the champ comes out swinging, with a KO in the first minute!
Re: Oriental buffet on the rim of a volcano by Bachus	9-Sep-03/1:45 PM
It was bad clams, I tells ya. This could benefit from a punctuation mark somewhere.
Re: All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin	9-Sep-03/1:59 PM
Ah the days of the Principia Discordia, the Illuminatus! Trilogy, and The Book of the SubGenius. I think I read them all in one year and it blew my mind wide open.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Sep-03/2:20 PM
Long distance relationships suck, don't they?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Sep-03/2:21 PM
Have you tried writing prose instead of poetry?
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Sep-03/3:06 PM
I'll give her something to write about. And I still say you should try writing short stories.