Re: F.R.O.G. by Garrett S Sexton	9-Sep-03/3:09 PM
like a haggis to the back of my knee.
Re: The Goodbye Hug by Amythest	9-Sep-03/3:29 PM
mama mia
Re: My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Sep-03/5:52 AM
?! :( :( ...
Re: End of year poem by <~>	16-Sep-03/8:44 PM
Beautiful, and sad. ~bzb
Re: Mentor by <~>	16-Sep-03/8:49 PM
I'm trying hard to be impartial... probably not possible. Ten.
Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8	16-Sep-03/8:54 PM
You make me mad with jealousy. Ten. Ten you bastard. Ten you olympian brain weaver.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-03/10:34 PM
very nice
Re: The Khat by Bachus	17-Sep-03/9:31 PM
yes
Re: When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Sep-03/5:22 AM
The rhythm flung me all over the place, but here's an 8 anyway.
Re: Murderers in the Tropics by Fear of Garbage	21-Sep-03/5:56 AM
Sizzlechest
Re: Love in the Tropics by Fear of Garbage	21-Sep-03/7:50 PM
pick up the knife and cut those ropes
Re: Madam Z - [<~>] - Snake Pen & Holy Grail by SupremeDreamer	22-Sep-03/2:59 PM
Like a headbutt from the lead singer of Insane Clown Posse. It certainly has my attention, but I wouldn't rate it highly. Yeshua was complex, and the only harness he wore was of humility, if the old tales can be said to have any truth to them. Take a nice bath. Try epsom salts. Then have some ice cream. With cherry sauce. As for those decayed lips, you might want to see a doctor.
Re: Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~>	25-Sep-03/10:26 PM
Fiore dolce
Re: (fragment) by razorgrin	25-Sep-03/11:51 PM
I like the rosetta stone metaphor.
Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Sep-03/5:56 PM
Hilarious and somewhat bitter. Ten.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Oct-03/7:32 PM
short and lovely mmm
Re: Gone missing by INTRANSIT	2-Oct-03/7:37 PM
first line good second line, did you mean decent? third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Oct-03/7:51 PM
I think the poem should end with "and into the light". the rest is a little pedagogic. Hm. Part I is a ten. Part II and III is a seven maybe.
Re: angst by nentwined	2-Oct-03/7:55 PM
Yup.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Oct-03/7:58 PM
This poem makes my nuts swell. Watch out for tree rats.