Re: Surreal... by Yardbird	16-Jan-03/9:25 PM
Wow, What are you?
Re: American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE	16-Jan-03/9:24 PM
i like he idea, but remember "Pride before fall"
Re: Women Fight Dirty by scitz	16-Jan-03/9:22 PM
Point well made, only You don't have a clue of what you are talking about
Re: a comment on Thorns of Grace by smlink84	16-Jan-03/7:09 AM
Thank You
Re: Cat by Topaz Servias	13-Jan-03/8:39 PM
You have to tell me about this
Re: Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer	13-Jan-03/8:35 PM
What a sorry piece of crap. Take care.
Re: a comment on Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer	13-Jan-03/8:35 PM
What The hell is all this about, TOPAZ?
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	13-Jan-03/8:30 PM
It's good, but get the emotions organized and not so vague. 7
Re: The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	13-Jan-03/8:28 PM
WOW. Have a nice day. 0
Re: a comment on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84	12-Jan-03/7:49 PM
What's so bad about rhyming Blame name and shame? They are part of the poem and they have a distinct meaning. Like "name", Symbolic for "me".
Re: a comment on P.L. I wrote this in seven minutes at 1:36am. But I hope You can get the gist by smlink84	12-Jan-03/7:44 PM
"crush my dreams", your an idiot.
Re: When I wake... by Topaz Servias	6-Jan-03/7:54 PM
Intersting, I wonder whom you are talking about. man-with-pants
Re: Track.... by Topaz Servias	6-Jan-03/7:52 PM
I have seen the murky line On which your soul will twine Sandwhich is what you wanted right? Dirty room like the twilight.
Re: Maria by Nicholas Monson	28-Dec-02/7:09 PM
Very NIce, "Whom is the correct grammar", don't worry. I also feel that" Then I first espied her. She had beauty to excess! A laugh to shiver spines - A Galician princess. What mystic Yorkshire root Was stirred in quiemada? What supernatural spice Was robbed from heaven's larder?" is very descriptive in imagery.
Re: Gone by Katie2	28-Dec-02/6:49 PM
Interesting. It would be better if you used more imagery and weren't so blunt about it.
Re: The canary's last song by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Dec-02/6:47 PM
"melody in a cage", I like the metaphor. Do You like Robert Frost?
Re: a comment on Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84	25-Dec-02/7:13 PM
Seem's like it right? I had fun writing this.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus	25-Dec-02/6:57 PM
I liked the gist of this poem, but the meataphors you decided to use hold no particular meaning in literature or even logically. " Crocodiles drown in synchronized sorrow," I really thought of this particualr verse as, well stupid. Don't be offeneded, as I said like the theme behind this poem and thought it better than many of the others I have read. I'm only trying to help you out. It would be alot better if you added symbolism that made sense. for instance, a candle is usally related to life, a hawk is reffered to as the soul.
Re: I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird	22-Nov-02/7:52 PM
I like it.
Re: Sod this! This poem can't rhyme for toffee... by Yardbird	22-Nov-02/7:48 PM
Funny.