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When I wake... (Free verse) by Topaz Servias
I want to sleep knowing I'll wake to the sweet smell of your hair, to the feel of your heart beat against my chest, to hear your soft steady breathing as you peacfully slumber cuddled safely in my arms. I want to know that you were with me all night by my side. I want to see you wake and wipe away the remnants of sleep, to steal the first kiss as dreams linger in the back of your mind. I want to see you smile as your eyes fix on me, to see the light behind them as a window to your heart knowing what was...what is..and what will come, to hear my name on your lips, soft and sweet.

Up the ladder: im playing basketball
Down the ladder: The Feild In Which I Live

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.5
Overall Rank: 2703
Posted: December 28, 2002 7:57 PM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2002 7:57 PM PST
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[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Dec-02/8:00 PM | Reply
that was lip cervasa.???
[n/a] Topaz Servias @ 68.100.154.95 > Bachus | 29-Dec-02/10:22 AM | Reply
What do you imply with that statement, Bachus?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.35.159.3 | 29-Dec-02/4:26 PM | Reply
You want to see her wipe?
[7] smlink84 @ 67.27.78.82 | 6-Jan-03/7:54 PM | Reply
Intersting, I wonder whom you are talking about. man-with-pants
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