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The canary's last song (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}> Melody caged,
goes silent with clawed swipe.
Cat naps, feathers float.
Up the ladder:
Invisible too
Down the ladder:
The Longest Wait (Revised)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.2727275
Posted: December 28, 2002 5:38 PM PST; Last modified: May 23, 2003 9:03 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.1363635 Overall Rank: 1080 Comments:
cute haiku
very warner brothers. nicely done.
Read Soderstrom's new poem (Theology)----it's great!
i would give a higher rank, but it doesn't follow 5-7-5 syllable restriction
but the content is very cool
clawed and caged are two syllables each chewie, not one.
Also haikus can be less then 17 syllables, according to any higher than 'intermediate' creative writing instructor. 327 view(s)
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