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The canary's last song (Haiku) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

Melody caged, goes silent with clawed swipe. Cat naps, feathers float.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 30-May-03/2:46 PM
clawed and caged are two syllables each chewie, not one.
Also haikus can be less then 17 syllables, according to any higher than 'intermediate' creative writing instructor.




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